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Wednesday, 6 November 2013

Prompt Writing 5




“Come on Christle let’s go to the Cafe.” Jack said in a hurry. “Ok let’s go.” Replied Christle. “Where are we going ?” Asked John. “We are going to the Cafe.” Answered Christle.

Once upon a time, there were 3 best friends and they were going to the Cafe on a nice hot Sunny day. “Which Cafe should we go to Star Cafe or the Golden Cafe.” Asked Christle. “I think that we should go to the Star Cafe, I like their Mochaccino.” Replied John. “Yeah me too.” Added John.

So the 3 best friends went to the Star Cafe to grab 2 Mochaccinos and 1 Coffee. After they had ordered. They all sat down outside the Cafe and had their first sip of their Delicious Beverages. “Ahhhh, this Mochaccino is the best.” Said John in delight. “I know they make the best Mochaccinos.” Added Jack.

But when Christle had a sip of her drink she started to look weird. Her wonderful Blonde hair were Pony Tails and she was wearing Glasses. “Christle!! What happened to you?” Jack said in horror. She just looked at Jack and said “who are you?” “I am Jack your best friend.” Jack said confused. “Do you remember me, i’m John your other best friend.” He said with hope. “Ummm, no.” “What happened to you!!” They both said.”

So the 3 best friends that turned into 2 best friends all left with a hurry to Jack’s House to figure out a solution. “She must of changed when she had a sip of the Coffee!!” John said. “But how??” Replied Jack. “I don’t know.” Jack answered.

After when they were both trying to find out the Solution, Jack’s Mum came and she said “hi” to Jack, John and Christle.” Hello.” Jack and John replied back. “What happened to Christle.” She asked with confusion. “We don’t because we went to Star Cafe and she ordered a Coffee and when she sipped it she turned, wel tot his!! Jack said walking around in circles. “Ohhhh, I know how to fix this problem. Jack’s Mum said. “How, HOW!! John and Jack said nearly begging on their Knees. Christle was just sitting on a Chair in the Lounge looking really confused. So then the Mum started “ well first you need to go outside and then you need to go outside and get the Garden Blower and blow it on Christle. Then that will be how to fix her. “Thanks.” They both said.



Then they ran outside got the Garden Blower made Christle stand still and when they blew it on her she turned back to her normal-self. “Yay! She’s back.” they both said. “What happened?” Christle asked with confusion. Then Jack spoke. “Well it’s a long story but we’ll tell it to you when we get into the House.” So after this the 3 best friends went inside the House and had some Coffee.

The End.

Tuesday, 5 November 2013

Prompt Writing 4



“Don’t forget the Water Hannah!” Shouted Elliot from the other Bedroom. “I’ve already got it packed.” Replied Hannah. “What about the Sunscreen?” Asked Elliot. “Yes i’ve got that packed as well.” Answered Hannah. “Then we are all set.”


On a sunny beautiful Saturday Morning Hannah and Elliot were going to Hike to a Forest. They were extra excited to see all the Animals. They both loved Animals especially Monkeys.


“Ok let’s hop in the Car and set off.” Elliot demanded. So they both got into the Car and set off for their Adventure. When they parked their car next to the gate for the entrance of the Forest they got their Supplies out and started walking. Elliot put the keys in his bag to keep it safe. But he forgot to zip it up!! Elliot didn’t notice it and just kept on walking.


When they had came walked for a whole half an hour they decided to have a rest. So they sat down under a shady tree to relax. “Ahhh, that’s much better isn’t it Elliot? Elliot where are you!” Said Hannah in confusion. “Oh no they're gone!!” Shouted Elliot searching around. “What’s gone, what’s gone??” Hannah said as she stood up. “The car keys, they have vanished from my bag.” Said Elliot in terror. “How?” Said Hannah searching around as well. “I don’t know.” Replied Elliot. “ We have to find them.” Said Hannah.


So the Brother and Sister got up in a jiffy and started to search for the keys. They look in trees, they looked under dirt, they looked between rocks and in birds nest but no there were no sign of the missing keys anywhere. “What are we going to do?” Hannah said in fear. Then just as she spoke she spotted something shiny, they were the keys. A Monkey with big bold yellow eyes were holding it. “There they are!” She said with anger. “Get that Monkey!” Elliot exclaimed.



So they both ran after that Monkey. They climbed trees, they swang from vine to vine and they even crawled but no they could not get that Monkey. But then Elliot stopped and said “wait, he had a idea. Hannah did you pack any fruit.” Then Hannah replied, “umm yeah i think so.” So Hannah took some fruit out and Elliot grabbed it from  her hands. He spread the fruit out on his paws and said, “come here Monkey i’ve got some fruit and i’ve got some tasty Bananas.” Just as silence fell a hungry Monkey came jumping for the fruit just as he jumped onto Elliot he dropped the keys and Hannah caught them. “Hooray!! We’ve got the keys back.”


After when the Monkey ate all the Fruit he jumped out of Elliot and climbed back in the Trees. “Now we can enjoy the rest of our hike.” So then they enjoyed the rest of their exciting Adventure.

Saturday, 2 November 2013

Prompt Writing 3



“Why are we here again Ashley?” Questioned Tom. “We are here to write a report about these kinds of Tigers“ replied Ashley.

On a drowsy day Ashley and Tom went to the Zoo so Ashley could write a report about the kinds of Tigers. “I am going to make this the best Report about Tigers ever!!” Said Ashley enthusiastically. Tom just rolled his eyes and they both kept on walking.

“Now we need to find the Tigers section and see them then we are going to ask the Zookeeper some questions as well” Said Ashley. “Is this going to take long because I am hungry?“ Tom said rubbing his tummy and licking his lips. “Ok we can go get something to eat now, then we will start looking at the Tigers“ Ashley said in a hurry. So they both headed off to buy some Corn Dogs and a Drink. After their Snack they both were very full. “That was a good Snack wasn’t it Tom?“ “It was delicious” whispered Tom.

After their Snack they both headed off to the Tigers Section. When they started to walk Tom found a sign that pointed to where the Tigers were. “Oh, oh I found it” he said jumping up and down. “Where?” asked Ashley. Tom pointed to the sign and then they rushed away. “Oh my gosh, do we have to go in that cage?“ Said Tom in horror. “Yes, Tom we have to. We can do it!!” Ashley said encouragingly to Tom. “Ok. I can do it, I can do it“ chanted Tom.

For the tour people have to go in a cage tha will has wheels and you see all the different Tigers. They jumped on the cages and looked at the people. It was pretty scary. After gaining confidence Ashley and TOm stood in line waiting to go in the cage. When it was their turn to go inside the cage, they both took one step at a time. When they entered the cage Ashley said, “see, what did I say TOm? there is nothing to be afraid of.“ TOm replied, “you were right there is nothing to be afraid of” But then when it came to travelling they got really scared and when Ashley was writing notes she dropped her pen and it went through a little hole in the cage. “Oh oh, I dropped my pen TOm, what do we do??“ Tom answered, “I don’t know. Let’s think of what to do“ So they thought and thought. They thought hard. Then TOm said ” I have an idea, we can just ask the Zookeeper to get it for us“ With joy Ashley replied, “what a marvellous idea.“

Ashley asked the Zookeeper and she stepped out of the cage grabbed the Pen and then hopped back inside to continue the tour. Ashley took the pen and held onto to the Pen tight not letting it out of her sight. After the tour they both left the Zoo and the next day Ashley gave her report to her Boss and she said that it was the best Report about Tigers. Ashley and Tom were very happy.

Friday, 1 November 2013

Prompt Writing 2



“Hurry up Cody, we want to get a good spot to sit” Sally said impatiently. “Just wait a minute, I am coming, I am just putting my hat on”, Cody replied.

On one beautiful gorgeous sunny day, Sally and Cody decided to go the beach. “It is a lovely day, isn’t it Cody?“ Said Sally. “Yes! It is“ replied Cody. “But it is also hot“ Sally said. “I need to put my hat on to protect my face.” So Sally put her hat on and watched the glorious view.

“Maybe later on we could go for a swim?“ Said Cody. “Oh yes!“ answered Sally. “The Beach looks nice and cold enough to swim in. I think that I might need my sunglasses?“ So Sally got out her sunglasses and put them on her eyes.

“I think that I might put some sunscreen on“ Said Cody. “Oh no!!” Shouted Cody. “What happened Cody?“ “We have forgotten the sunscreen. We can’t swim in the hot burning sun! If we did then we would get sunburned.“ Sally said in terror “I don’t want to get sunburned! What are we going to do??”

So Cody and Sally started to think of a solution to their problem. They thought and thought and thought. Sally had the solution, “I’ve got it! We can just drive back home, grab the sunscreen!” Sally said in happiness. “Great idea! “ Cody said.

So they both headed back home, grabbed the sunscreen then headed back to the beach. “Now we can have a good time at the beach! This is great!“ Sally exclaimed. So Sally and Cody put their sunscreen on and went swimming and had they had a great time.

Friday, 25 October 2013

Thank You Letter to the Jam Bus Team

Dear Jam Bus Team,

Thank you for your time and effort that you have put into the CD for us. Thank you for giving us this opportunity of recording and for the 2nd chances that you gave us when we made mistakes. Thank you for giving us a free CD!!

I really appreciate it and I always listen to our fantastic songs that we have produced. Thank you for recording our 2 songs, Haere Mai and Something in the Water. This was my first experience of recording a song and I think that it was magnificent.

How I felt about this was awesome and wonderful. I hope that in the future you will come and Record St Pius X again.

Yours sincerely, Alecia.

Thursday, 24 October 2013

Amber the Lonely Girl


This is a book an the site that we used was a site called 'Storybird.' It is really cool and I hope that you will my Story.

Friday, 18 October 2013

Squash!

“Awesome!” ” It is going to be straight after Morning Tea,” Miss G said. “ I wonder how to play Squash?” my friends said.

Today the first day of Term 4 , we are going to be playing our first Kiwi Sport of the Term, Squash!! Finally Morning Tea had ended and it was time to go. I felt very excited and puzzled at what we were going to be playing. We were playing Squash so we could get some exercise, so we can learn how to play Squash then teach over people and also to have fun!!

When we entered the hall we saw rackets, little yellow balls and a big blue wall. Now I was really puzzled at what we were going to play. When I saw 2 men standing next to the big wall I knew that they were our Instructors.

We sat down next to the wall and the Instructors introduced themselves. Their names were Phil and Michael.

First they asked us if we had ever played Squash. Most of the Class said “no.” So they had like 5 rallies and Michael won nearly all of them. Michael was really good. Now I felt really excited because Squash looked really interesting and fun.

After this Phil and Michael told us some rules. Like the rules were that the ball can only bounce once on the floor. If the ball bounces twice then you are out. If the ball comes back to you just after when you have hit it and the other player is just about to hit you then that is called a Let and that means that this is a replay. Another rule is that whenever you serve you have to serve over the 2nd blue line. And also if you hit the ball over the 3rd blue line then you are out.

After when the Instructors told us the rules we they split us into 2 groups. 1 group will go and play some real Squash and the other group will learn some skills. My group was the group that got to play Squash because the other group wanted to learn some skills first.

SO my group had a period of time to play and I had to admit it was pretty fun. But most of us that played wasn’t very good but then I knew after the 3 sessions we would make a improvement. I felt kind of tired after playing because it was pretty hard.

After playing Squash we went with the other Instructor Phil. He taught us some skills like bouncing the ball on the racket and bouncing the ball on both sides of the rackets. And also we could bounce the ball on the steel edge of the racket, Phil was really good at it. He taught us a lot of tricks and skills. These skills were really cool as well.

After the tricks and skills our lesson was over and everyone had to sit by the blue wall again. Then after this Phil and Michael asked us what what was the rules that we learned today. We only said like 2 or 3 rules.

Squash was created in the 1830’s by a School called Harrow. The Students discovered that Rackets, Balls and a wall could be such so fun. They soon discovered that it involved 2 opponents then started to play with 2 people, then later on it became an international game. The 2 best people to play Squash are Ramy Ashour and Nicol David. Ramy Ashour is the best man and Nicol David is the best woman. Their usual points that they usually score are around the thousand’s

When you play Squash you would need to wear a t-shirt. Some comfortable shoes and some protective eye wear. You have to wear protective eye wear because the ball that you hit is really fast and then it might come and hit you in the eye then that would really hurt.

After this awesome session I really enjoy playing Squash because it was really fun and challenging. Next time I go to Squash I hope that I have improved. I like Squash.