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Thursday, 24 October 2013

Amber the Lonely Girl


This is a book an the site that we used was a site called 'Storybird.' It is really cool and I hope that you will my Story.

4 comments:

  1. Wow Alecia, that was just an amazing story bird it had really interesting words. I loved the part when Sofia gave Amber a muffin and they became friends it was really lovely. Maybe next time you could make the sentences a little bit longer. Well done keep up the amazing work Alecia:)

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  2. Thank you Rosrine for your Feedback. Remember to look at my other posts. :-)

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  3. Wow Alecia that was an amazing story it was really interesting to read your story i like the part when Sofia gave Amber the muffin. Hope you keep up the good work.

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  4. Hi Alecia
    Wow that was a amazing story bird you have done. That was really interesting. I loved your pictures and I also like how you picked your pictures. Keep Up The Good Work Alecia. :-)

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