I am a Year 8 student at St Pius X Catholic School in Auckland. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Mrs Tui.
Wow Alecia, that was just an amazing story bird it had really interesting words. I loved the part when Sofia gave Amber a muffin and they became friends it was really lovely. Maybe next time you could make the sentences a little bit longer. Well done keep up the amazing work Alecia:)
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Wow Alecia that was an amazing story it was really interesting to read your story i like the part when Sofia gave Amber the muffin. Hope you keep up the good work.
Hi AleciaWow that was a amazing story bird you have done. That was really interesting. I loved your pictures and I also like how you picked your pictures. Keep Up The Good Work Alecia. :-)