I am going to be writing about my Mother.
My mother has black eyes and beautiful hair. My mother has got brown highlights in her hair that makes her look like the most beautiful woman in the world!! Every time I SEE my mother I see a beautiful, awesome and loving person.
In the mornings, whenever I have to wake up, I always HEAR my mum’s voice. Her voice will be as screechy as a car with bad brakes. But when she is in a good mood her voice can be as wonderful as enjoying a nice block of chocolate.
In the weekend her my mum’s baking TASTES delicious! My mum loves to bake and she is really good at baking. Her specialties are Brownies, Cupcakes and Loafs of Bread. They taste just as sweet as Candy and I love, love, love, love Candy!!
When my Mum walks past me and I SMELL her perfume it smells just as better as her baking!! She has a lot of perfumes but 1 of her perfumes smell as though I was in heaven. But even when she isn’t wearing any perfume she still smells as though I am in heaven.
Whenever I TOUCH my Mum when I am hugging her it feels like as though I have a loving and caring Mother that will always support me and be there for me.
Awesome writing Alecia. I love your comparisions and how you liken things that are very relevant and special to you.
ReplyDeleteHi Alecia,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your writing, it was very detailed and descriptive. The words you used in it were cute, but descriptive. Why not next time you try and use bigger words to do describe, just to make it more interesting. Other than that your writing was enjoyable and keep up the good work :)